Heres the new email:
Dear…
Currently, we are enrolled in the national Exploravision contests, which are sponsored by Toshiba. These contests are included as part of the curriculum in the Kennesaw Mountain Magnet Program. Two friends and myself have formed a group under the name AEONS; Amorphous ElectrOmagnetic Nonmalleable Sheliding. Exploravision gives a group of students four months to create a new technology, gather research on its progress thus far, and create a web site outlining the future of such a technology, as well as its past.
The goal of AEONS is to find a way to incorporate amorphous metals into shielding purposes for the United States Military. We are currently in development of our prototype, as well as our website.
However, we realize that we lack the resources and knowledge to realize the true potential of amorphous metals in defensive applications. We would be truly grateful if you would consider assisting AEONS as our mentor.
If you are interested in this position, you can reach us at -----@-----.---
I know i dont go far into the KMHS mag subject, and that will probably need to be changed. Other than that, it gets the message across. What do u think. BTW, is the next paper due tomorow?

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