THX Justin
Good job Justin. Few things:
- December 2005 won't come for another 11 months.
- Coupla run-on sentences near the end. If it were just Carter, I wouldn't complain, but Keinel is gonna be reading this, so we should probably shorten those.
- Besides, the more sentences we have, the more fluff we can insert without tripping Kienel's bullshitometer.
- Lastly (line 13) you cite "corrosive resistant" but I am relatively certain (note the use of indiscrimanate qualifiers releasing me from any responsibility should I be wrong) that it should be "corrosion resistant". But whatever.

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